Greetings! This is my first self made adventure, There are three episodes in this small adventure.
Story Line: Malbri used to be a great working city but years ago it was been destroyed by their rivals. Along the road you will notice a hostile god who will do everything to destroy Malbri. There are four friendly gods in this adventure who may aid you.
I Tried my best to put a story into it. I'ts more about the gameplay and challange you will face on this adventure. It won't be easy.
(Edited: I fixed most problems.)
Feel free to share your tips and rate my adventure! Thanks for playing it!
In the 2nd mission it calls for 128 people in estates? I think? Which is second-to-last common housing.
I think you wanted to put '128 people in Manors' as a goal.
There were quite a few typos and bad grammar/syntax but I think it's because you're still learning English.
Other than that: the adventure was fast, simple and quite decent for a first try! While I blazed through it even on Olympian difficulty, I had some fun with it.
Good luck with future adventures, you do have potential.
Posted on 11/25/16 @ 07:13 PM
Your map's really not bad for a first time. :D
However, the story kinda feels like a tutorial to me.
Anyway, might try this out once my exams are over and break finally settles in. :)
Posted on 11/26/16 @ 05:52 AM
This was nice adventure, i myself prefer this not so big parent city maps. Map is pretty cool, i like the design, but the whole adventure felt kinda empty without the story. Overall, adventure is pretty decent, maybe too easy but its still enjoyable and i think that most important! Keep up with good work!